Since I have finished the changes required I have e-mailed Zena with the second draft.
When Zena got back to me having watched the video she said:
To summarize the feedback given by Zena for the next draft I will:
- Remove the title as it is clear enough from the visuals that it is a day in the life of Emily Flouquet.
- Change the logo in the top corner to a PNG rather than JPG so we don’t have the white rectangle around it.
- Change job titles to be in italics and not bold so that the name and title have a clearer separation.
- Cut down what Emily is saying in one of the first interviews due to legality issues, also use a different background track due to legality issues for the business.