Draft 2 – Feedback

Since I have finished the changes required I have e-mailed Zena with the second draft.

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When Zena got back to me having watched the video she said:

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To summarize the feedback given by Zena for the next draft I will:

  • Remove the title as it is clear enough from the visuals that it is a day in the life of Emily Flouquet.
  • Change the logo in the top corner to a PNG rather than JPG so we don’t have the white rectangle around it.
  • Change job titles to be in italics and not bold so that the name and title have a clearer separation.
  • Cut down what Emily is saying in one of the first interviews due to legality issues, also use a different background track due to legality issues for the business.
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