Here is the email sent to Zena with draft 3.
When she had received this and watched draft 3 of the video Zena replied with this:
Once again the feedback given was very helpful, here is a summary of what was suggested:
- Adjust the music so that we can clearly hear what is being said in interviews
- Amend job titles so they match with what people have said.
- Edit Will’s interview as it is a bit too long.
- Check about stability of shots and check the positioning of the logo.