Draft 3 – Feedback

Here is the email sent to Zena with draft 3.

draft-3-email

When she had received this and watched draft 3 of the video Zena replied with this:

draft-3-feedback

Once again the feedback given was very helpful, here is a summary of what was suggested:

  • Adjust the music so that we can clearly hear what is being said in interviews
  • Amend job titles so they match with what people have said.
  • Edit Will’s interview as it is a bit too long.
  • Check about stability of shots and check the positioning of the logo.
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