Draft 4 – Feedback

I have once again sent the updated video to Zena and here is a copy of my e-mail sent.

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Zena has now been able to watch draft 4 and give me some more feedback. Here is what she said:

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To summarize what Zena said:

  • Cut Will’s interview shorter still to make sure it flows well.
  • Cut out the first pan as Zena sees it as unnecessary.
  • Add more of an effect to the entrance of titles.
  • Add an end page with their social links.
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