I have once again sent the updated video to Zena and here is a copy of my e-mail sent.
Zena has now been able to watch draft 4 and give me some more feedback. Here is what she said:
To summarize what Zena said:
- Cut Will’s interview shorter still to make sure it flows well.
- Cut out the first pan as Zena sees it as unnecessary.
- Add more of an effect to the entrance of titles.
- Add an end page with their social links.